YO i'm too lazy to write, so I'm just going to criticize everyone else, starting from the first page oml
The Avalanches
(fletch)you did fletchling and didn't even mention swords dance, yet you mention tailwind (which is only mentioned in OO on the set iirc)
TCR
(amaura)maybe mention that nature power and hyper beam are affected by refrigerate, when you mention them to begin with - refrigerate is its main selling point, so i wouldn't wait till the end of the paragraph to talk about it - just a write-up nitpick
LightningLuxray
(missy)yeah missy has 3 immunities, but I wouldn't really call Ghost a good Defensive typing in LC since everything and its mother carries dark coverage-however it is bulky as fuck which gives it the ability to switch in and set up a lot. mention HP Fighting, that is (or should be) just as common as DGleam among top players, and Destiny Bond alongside Wisp+sub
Max Carvalho
(zig)most ziggy actually run protect to beat fake out users
missy, support - your first sentence is a bit clunky, you should mention it taunting set-up sweepers at the same time you mention it taunting hazard users - i guess just work on the order of your sentences and put the most important things first
archen, support - i'd mention that archen has decent speed as well, though it's not the most important thing in the world
croagunk - it has decent speed?
trubbish - your first sentence doesn't really make sense and it's also 'fluff' - just remove it all together
riolu - mention protect, that's like one of the best moves riolu can run. mention swords dance as well, it's a great sweeper with priority HJK
magby - you wait till right at the end to say that Belly Drum is the most effective set - refer to what I said about Missy, and put the most important/common things at the beginning.
staryu - 30/55/55 are not good defensive stats - if it didn't have an eviolite staryu would be frail as fuck. its speed is its best quality, mention that nearer to the top.
sparktrain
(cottone)tailwind is worth a mention after stun spore and sunny day
Alter
(porygon)no ponyta uses flash fire - houndour is a better example
pawniard - choice scarf is actually by far the most common Pawniard set rn, i'd rewrite it slightly to reflect that more - you make it sound like it's just something that is seen occasionally, but isn't the most common at all - pursuit should also be given a big mention
horyzhnz
(timburr)i don't think any timburr ever uses iron fist or sheer force - certainly not enough to mention in a threatlist anyway. also, 'newly buffed knock off' goes against the write up tips set out in the OP.
Alphose_Elric
(koffing)mention clear smog
Aerow
omanyte outspeeds 17 speed smashers, so say that instead of 16. mention that it differs from tirtouga for being a special attacker
magnemite - mag can run magnet pull as wel, but idk if this goes in offensive or support idk, ask tcr i guess
archen, offensive - mention u-turn and knock off
bellsprout - the second clause in your first sentence is just kinda fluff. weather ball is
technically a 100BP move that gets boost from the sun, so maybe say 'effectively turns into' rather than what you have now.
vullaby - maybe say 'most effective' rather than 'only viable users of defog'
Corporal Levi
mienfoo, defensive - at least mention fake out alongside taunt
mienfoo, offensive - regen is still preferable to reckless on offensive sets, you make it sound like all LO foo will use reckless.
slowpoke - does it even use EQ???
zeriloa
tirt, defensive - mention aqua jet for picking off weakened threats which is still almost always used on defensive
Amp Pharaohs
larvesta- you didn't mention the 4x rock weakness
honedge - give Dbond a mention when talking about autotomize
Unfixable
probabbly worth mentioning that surskit is usually seen with a focus sash
Aaron's Aron
bulba - bulkiest growth user is probs bulba's best sun niche
gunk - don't mention bullet punch it sucks, but do mention fake out. don't mention embargo lol. you seem to be missing the point of Croagunk's support role tbh - it supports the team by being a glue that can check loads of things, not using shit like taunt and embargo. maybe
TCR could move this to defensive though.
torchic - why mention hone claws, just for the sake of it - no-one's going to be passing hone claws when you have SD.
hippo - mention that whirlwind phazes as well, not just racks up damage
shellos - EPower hits gunk, more importantly than electrics (but still mention both)