While I appreciate the effort put in, I'm afraid that this is simply not up to standards. There are a lot of issues (and not just "typos made in haste" though the fact that you chose to simply acknowledge them instead of fix them is questionable) that make it unfeasible to let this go on.
Before you write another analysis, I highly suggest you work on your prose and sentence structure- a lot of this just stems from clunky sentence and paragraph structure, and a multitude of issues that combine to make the analysis difficult to read.
If you want more in-depth criticism, you can PM me, and we can go through the analysis. Either way, I'm going to have to reassign this analysis.
Before you write another analysis, I highly suggest you work on your prose and sentence structure- a lot of this just stems from clunky sentence and paragraph structure, and a multitude of issues that combine to make the analysis difficult to read.
If you want more in-depth criticism, you can PM me, and we can go through the analysis. Either way, I'm going to have to reassign this analysis.