Rate and Edit My Team Please!

[rayquaza58555]

Charizard-Mega-X @ Charizardite X
Ability: Tough Claws
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 HP
Adamant Nature
- Roost
- Dragon Dance
- Dragon Claw
- Flare Blitz

Charizard-X is the main sweeper on my team, he almost always can get up a dragon dance, and then starts to tear the other team apart. It works really well most of the time, especially when my opponent thinks that it is Charizard-Y instead, and tries to use a water type move, which ends up doing neutral damage instead, and Charizard-X sets up on that.

Talonflame @ Choice Band
Ability: Gale Wings
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 HP
Adamant Nature
- Brave Bird
- U-Turn
- Flare Blitz
- Tailwind

This is a pretty typical Talonflame set, great for revenge killing, or sometimes even sweeping three or four members of the opponent team with priority Brave Bird. Tailwind is there just for a suicide move, and mainly because I couldn't think of anything else to put there, so suggestions are welcome.

Greninja @ Life Orb
Ability: Protean
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 4 HP
Timid Nature
- Ice Beam
- Grass Knot
- Dark Pulse
- Surf

Greninja is a great special sweeper with this set, and takes a lot of people by surprise. I have seen Ice Beam OHKO a Dragonite with Multiscale, and Dark Pulse normally OHKO's a lot of Aegislash's when they are in attack form. Greninja is mainly my anti-dragon/late game sweeper due to it's insane speed, and great special attack

Aegislash @ Leftovers
Ability: Stance Change
EVs: 240 HP / 252 SAtk / 16 Def
- King's Shield
- Sacred Sword
- Shadow Ball
- Shadow Sneak

Aegislash is there to tank some physical blows when it needs to, and deal some decent damage back in return. I wasn't really sure about the EV's that I had put in there, so some advice on those would really help.

Rotom-Wash @ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 SDef / 196 HP / 4 SAtk / 56 Def
Calm Nature
- Volt Switch
- Thunderbolt
- Will-O-Wisp
- Hydro Pump

Pretty standard build for Rotom-Wash here. Tanks pretty much anything anyone throws at him, and can deal some pretty decent damage back in return. I like sending him out when a physical sweeper comes out, such as someone like Garchomp, and burning them, which severely hinders the damage that they can do.

Thundurus (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Prankster
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 4 HP
Timid Nature
- Thunder Wave
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Focus Blast

Thundurus is the Pokemon that I am kind of skeptical about. He does well in some situations, paralyzing anyone that is faster than him, and dealing decent damage to anything. But if he can't KO the Pokemon he is up against he pretty much instantly dies, which leads me to want to switch him out, but maybe i have built him wrong. If so, please tell me about something I can do to make him work better, or strategies that I could use.

Most importantly, my Pokemon aren't set in stone, except for maybe Charizard-X because he has not failed me yet, except for against Azumarill, which Rotom-Wash/Thundurus can take care of, so new Pokemon suggestions are welcome. Thanks!

 

[Frozen Arrow]

You Need a spinnner/Defogger, especially as you are running both charizard and talonflame. Popular Pokemon that can do this are Excadrill, latios/Latias and mandibuzz.

 

[rayquaza58555]

I was thinking about that, I think i will add excadrill instead of someone like thundurus or aegislash

 

[Frozen Arrow]

I was thinking about that, I think i will add excadrill instead of someone like thundurus or aegislash

Excadrill @ Air Balloon
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Rapid Spin
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Iron Head

This is the standard Excadrill set

 

[rayquaza58555]

Excadrill @ Air Balloon
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Rapid Spin
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Iron Head

This is the standard Excadrill set

Thanks! I'll definitely add that to my team and see how it works, especially because I find that Excadrill is also a great counter to banded Talonflames which I have some difficulty with.

 

[Hiroaki]

Hi Rayquaza. U have a little mistakes on your team. First try make at least 3 lines of description in all Pokemons, in this way u'll following the Rules for RMT also, put some sprites. Here: http://pkportuga.wordpress.com/jogos/geracao6/sprites-animados-xy/johto/

Also yours sets are wrong.

Greninja @ Life Orb
Ability: Protean
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 4 Def (Better throw 4 ev's on other stat because this will help against Stealth Rock and Life orb Recoil. also i recomend use 29 iv's HP on pokemons who use Life Orb.)
Timid Nature
- Hidden Power Grass (I prefer hp grass than grass knot because rotom-w but if u prefer grass knot go ahead) / dark Pulse
- Extrasensory (Is necessary for Mega-Venassaur, Ice beam dont make damage because Thick Fat.)
- Ice Beam
- Surf

Use Roost Instead of Tailwind on TalonFlame, even being Band, is better for the case u need roost because Stealth rock damage.

U can switch Rotom-W, Thundurus can make the place of rotom-W without ev's on spdef or def. And put some defoger or rapid spinner on his place.

Run for sp.def Aegis, maybe will be better, i dont know about that, but because u will remove Rotom-w, better go for bulky set on aegis.

Also try this set on Char-X

Bulky Dragon Dance
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name: Bulky Dragon Dance
move 1: Dragon Dance
move 2: Dragon Claw
move 3: Flare Blitz / Earthquake
move 4: Roost
ability: Blaze
item: Charizardite X
evs: 248 HP / 152 Atk / 108 Spd
nature: Adamant

Moves
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Dragon Dance increases Charizard-X's Attack and Speed simultaneously, turning it into a deadly threat after one or two boosts. Dragon Claw is the main STAB move that mostly doesn't have any setbacks aside from average base power, which can be fixed after some boosts. Flare Blitz should be your primary option over Earthquake because otherwise you lack serious power to wallbreak or effectively sweep. Earthquake can be used mainly to hit Heatran and Aegislash safely, as well as achieve sufficient neutral coverage alongside Dragon Claw. Finally, Roost is required to keep Charizard-X healthy, allowing it to gradually gain more boosts and win against weaker attackers.

Set Details
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- Outspeeds Greninja at +1.
- 248 HP for overall bulk
- Rest dumped in Attack with an Adamant.
- Outspeeds Jolly Breloom before Dragon dancing

I hope i helped u, i'm not an expert on this, but i think this is the basic things.

 

[rayquaza58555]

I'll definitely try that Charizard-X set, it seems like it would work well, but I'm not sure if Thundurus could take the place of Rotom-Wash because Rotom is such a good wall, I'll try it though and put Excadrill instead. Thanks!