Monotype Mega Charizard Y (Flying)

[CaptainDaimyo]

[SET]
Charizard @ Charizardite Y
name: Sun Wallbreaker
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Flamethrower / Fire Blast
- Solar Beam
- Focus Blast / Scorching Sands
- Roost / Hidden Power Electric

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Charizard Y makes for a great wallbreaker on Flying teams. Fire Blast, although it has lower accuracy, can be used over Flamethrower, notably 2HKOing Alolan Muk and Clodsire under sun. Solar Beam covers Water-types that resist Flamethrower like Swampert and Rotom-W, and thanks to sun, it does not need to charge. Focus Blast targets Dark- and Steel-types such as Hydreigon and Heatran. Alternatively, Scorching Sands can be used to target Heatran more reliably, as well as providing coverage against Toxapex and Iron Hands, the latter of which can be greatly hindered thanks to the burn chance. Hidden Power Electric can be run over Roost to greatly threaten Water teams in tandem with Solar Beam, threatening the likes of Pelipper, Mantine, and Gyarados. Dragonite and Mega Charizard Y form a great offensive pairing, with Mega Charizard Y threatening physically bulky threats like Mega Scizor and Corviknight for Dragonite, while Dragonite acts as a late-game sweeper and deals with Alolan Muk and Nihilego for Mega Charizard Y. Corviknight and Mantine are essential teammates, as they remove Stealth Rock with Defog, which would otherwise effectively leave Mega Charizard Y out of the match. Corviknight also brings Mega Charizard Y in with U-turn, while Mantine helps against rain teams, taking hits from Barraskewda and Mega Swampert. In turn, Mega Charizard Y takes out threats to them both like Rotom-W and Magnezone. It also appreciates entry hazard support from Landorus and Gliscor wearing down foes to help it wallbreak more easily, while both setters also provide an Electric immunity. In return, Mega Charizard Y handles Ice-types like Articuno and Mamoswine. Enamorus makes for a great partner because it handles Dark-types like Weavile and Greninja and provides Healing Wish support; it appreciates the removal of bulky Steel-types in return.

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[SET]
Charizard @ Charizardite Y
name: add set name
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Flamethrower
- Solar Beam
- Focus Blast / Scorching Sands
- Roost / Hidden Power Electric

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Charizard Y makes for a great wallbreaker under sun;. With Flamethrower, it threatens a multitude of threats such as Celesteela, Ferrothorn, Mega Scizor, Kyurem, and Articuno. Solar Beam covers Water-types and Rock-types that resist Flamethrower like Swampert and Rotom-W and Mega Diancie,[We honestly would want Landos, Gliscor or the Steel birds to take on the Rock mons, + M diancie just outspeeds and takes out Zard Y with Diamond Storm.] and it synergizes with Mega Charizard Y's sun. Focus Blast targets Dark- and Steel-types such as Hydreigon and Heatran. Alternatively, Scorching Sands can be used to target Fire- and Electric-types like the aforementioned Heatran, Torkoal, Mega Charizard X, and Iron Hands, the latter of which can be greatly hindered thanks to the burn chance. Roost give Mega Charizard Y access to a form of longevity, giving it more opportunities to wallbreak. [Self explanatory.] Hidden Power Electric can be run over Roost to targets Pelipper,and Mantine, and Moltres. Corviknight and Mantine are essential teammates, as they remove Stealth Rock with Defog that effectively leaves Mega Charizard Y out of the match.[Mention how Corviknight provides slow pivoting via U-turn which zard y appreciates.] Mantine also helps Flying teams against rain teams, taking hits from Barraskewda and Mega Swampert. Mega Charizard Y takes out threats to it like Choice Band Breloom, Rotom-W, and Magnezone. Entry hazard support from Landorus and Gliscor is appreciated by Mega Charizard Y, wearing down foes to help it wallbreak easier, while also providing Electric immunity and the two of them provide an Electric immunity.[Mention Gliscor providing pivoting via U-turn.] In return, Mega Charizard Y handles Ice-types like Articuno and Mamoswine Avalugg. Tornadus-T is a solid partner, taking out Fighting-types like Kommo-o and Galarian Zapdos and removing items like recovery items like Leftovers and Black Sludge from their holders like Toxapex and Clodsire. Mega Charizard Y struggles with Dragon-types such as Mega Altaria, Roaring Moon, and Garchomp. Enamorus thus makes for a great partner, and it also handles Dark-types like Weavile and Greninja; and it appreciates the removal of bulky Steel-types in return.[Mention Enamorus providing H Wish support.] Zapdos handles Water- and Flying-types like Toxapex, Pelipper, and Tornadus-T and brings in Mega Charizard Y in with Volt Switch; and it returns the favor by taking out Rock-types like Mega Diancie and Hisuian Arcanine in return. Lastly, Mega Charizard Y's wallbreaking opens up the door for lategame cleaners like Galarian Moltres and Dragonite to sweep lategame. [To cut down the Character limit, also 5 teammates for analyses.] [Add Dragonite as its own sentence, great physical wallbreaker. so it should be enamorus sentences then just Dragonite sentence :3]

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[CaptainDaimyo]

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[SET]
Charizard @ Charizardite Y
name: add set name
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Flamethrower
- Solar Beam
- Focus Blast / Scorching Sands
- Roost / Hidden Power Electric

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Charizard Y makes for a great wallbreaker under sun;. With Flamethrower, it threatens a multitude of threats such as Celesteela, Ferrothorn, Mega Scizor, Kyurem, and Articuno. Solar Beam covers Water-types and Rock-types that resist Flamethrower like Swampert and Rotom-W and Mega Diancie,[We honestly would want Landos, Gliscor or the Steel birds to take on the Rock mons, + M diancie just outspeeds and takes out Zard Y with Diamond Storm.] and it synergizes with Mega Charizard Y's sun. Focus Blast targets Dark- and Steel-types such as Hydreigon and Heatran. Alternatively, Scorching Sands can be used to target Fire- and Electric-types like the aforementioned Heatran, Torkoal, Mega Charizard X, and Iron Hands, the latter of which can be greatly hindered thanks to the burn chance. Roost give Mega Charizard Y access to a form of longevity, giving it more opportunities to wallbreak. [Self explanatory.] Hidden Power Electric can be run over Roost to targets Pelipper,and Mantine, and Moltres. Corviknight and Mantine are essential teammates, as they remove Stealth Rock with Defog that effectively leaves Mega Charizard Y out of the match.[Mention how Corviknight provides slow pivoting via U-turn which zard y appreciates.] Mantine also helps Flying teams against rain teams, taking hits from Barraskewda and Mega Swampert. Mega Charizard Y takes out threats to it like Choice Band Breloom, Rotom-W, and Magnezone. Entry hazard support from Landorus and Gliscor is appreciated by Mega Charizard Y, wearing down foes to help it wallbreak easier, while also providing Electric immunity and the two of them provide an Electric immunity.[Mention Gliscor providing pivoting via U-turn.] In return, Mega Charizard Y handles Ice-types like Articuno and Mamoswine Avalugg. Tornadus-T is a solid partner, taking out Fighting-types like Kommo-o and Galarian Zapdos and removing items like recovery items like Leftovers and Black Sludge from their holders like Toxapex and Clodsire. Mega Charizard Y struggles with Dragon-types such as Mega Altaria, Roaring Moon, and Garchomp. Enamorus thus makes for a great partner, and it also handles Dark-types like Weavile and Greninja; and it appreciates the removal of bulky Steel-types in return.[Mention Enamorus providing H Wish support.] Zapdos handles Water- and Flying-types like Toxapex, Pelipper, and Tornadus-T and brings in Mega Charizard Y in with Volt Switch; and it returns the favor by taking out Rock-types like Mega Diancie and Hisuian Arcanine in return. Lastly, Mega Charizard Y's wallbreaking opens up the door for lategame cleaners like Galarian Moltres and Dragonite to sweep lategame. [To cut down the Character limit, also 5 teammates for analyses.] [Add Dragonite as its own sentence, great physical wallbreaker. so it should be enamorus sentences then just Dragonite sentence :3]

[CREDITS]
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Thanks as usual boomp! This is implemented

 

[Mateeus]

-> Slash Fire Blast with Thrower in the first slot;
-> Instead of "Mega Charizard Y makes for a great wallbreaker under sun", I think "Mega Charizard Y is a great wallbreaker Flying teams have access to" or something along these lines is probably better. It's great outside of sun as well;
-> Flamethrower is obvious STAB; instead of describing it, add the things Fire Blast accomplish (2hkoes on special walls like Clodsire and Alolan Muk being the most notable feats);
-> In the Solar Beam sentence, "synergizes with Mega Charizard Y's sun" is kinda awkward. Instead, you could say it has no recharge under sun;
-> In the Scorching Sands sentence, say Heatran is hit more reliably by it, and add Toxapex which is a prime target of the move. Remove Zard X and Torkoal as examples;
-> HP Electric also lets Zard greatly threaten Water teams as a result;
-> Dragonite should probably be bumped up as the first teammate (it's Zard Y's partner in crime after all) - you should also say that it is able to break through special walls Zard would appreciate being removed.

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[CaptainDaimyo]

-> Slash Fire Blast with Thrower in the first slot;
-> Instead of "Mega Charizard Y makes for a great wallbreaker under sun", I think "Mega Charizard Y is a great wallbreaker Flying teams have access to" or something along these lines is probably better. It's great outside of sun as well;
-> Flamethrower is obvious STAB; instead of describing it, add the things Fire Blast accomplish (2hkoes on special walls like Clodsire and Alolan Muk being the most notable feats);
-> In the Solar Beam sentence, "synergizes with Mega Charizard Y's sun" is kinda awkward. Instead, you could say it has no recharge under sun;
-> In the Scorching Sands sentence, say Heatran is hit more reliably by it, and add Toxapex which is a prime target of the move. Remove Zard X and Torkoal as examples;
-> HP Electric also lets Zard greatly threaten Water teams as a result;
-> Dragonite should probably be bumped up as the first teammate (it's Zard Y's partner in crime after all) - you should also say that it is able to break through special walls Zard would appreciate being removed.

qc 2/2

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[SolarBeam]

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[SET]
Charizard @ Charizardite Y
name Name: Sun Wallbreaker
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Flamethrower / Fire Blast
- Solar Beam
- Focus Blast / Scorching Sands
- Roost / Hidden Power Electric

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Charizard Y makes for a great wallbreaker on Flying teams. Fire Blast, although having it has lower accuracy, can be used over Flamethrower, notably 2HKOing Alolan Muk and Clodsire under sun. Solar Beam covers Water-types that resist Flamethrower like Swampert and Rotom-W, and thanks to sun, it does not need to charge. Focus Blast targets Dark- and Steel-types such as Hydreigon and Heatran. Alternatively, Scorching Sands can be used to target Heatran more reliably, as well as providing coverage against Toxapex (RC) and Iron Hands, the latter of which can be greatly hindered thanks to the burn chance. Hidden Power Electric can be run over Roost to greatly threaten Water teams in tandem with Solar Beam, threatening the likes of Pelipper, Mantine, and Gyarados. Dragonite and Mega Charizard Y form a great offensive pairing, with Mega Charizard Y threatening physically bulky threats like Mega Scizor and Corviknight for Dragonite, while it Dragonite acts as a late-game sweeper while dealing and deals (avoiding while repetition) with Alolan Muk and Nihilego for Mega Charizard Y. Corviknight and Mantine are essential teammates, as they remove Stealth Rock with Defog, (AC) that which would otherwise effectively leaves leave Mega Charizard Y out of the match. Corviknight also brings it Mega Charizard Y in with U-turn, while Mantine helps against rain teams, taking hits from Barraskewda and Mega Swampert. In turn, (best to transition here) Mega Charizard Y takes out threats to it them both (assuming what you mean- "it" ambiguous here, if you mean something else put that thing instead) like Rotom-W (RC) and Magnezone. Entry It also appreciates entry (passive voice) hazard support from Landorus and Gliscor is appreciated by Mega Charizard Y (RC) wearing down foes to help it wallbreak easier more easily, while both setters (subject is hazard support, not lando + gliscor) also providing provide an Electric immunity. In return, Mega Charizard Y handles Ice-types like Articuno and Mamoswine. Enamorus makes for a great partner because it handles Dark-types like Weavile and Greninja and provides Healing Wish support; and it appreciates the removal of bulky Steel-types in return.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
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[CaptainDaimyo]

1/1, GP Team done

zard

blue = add
red = remove
(orange) = comment

[SET]
Charizard @ Charizardite Y
name Name: Sun Wallbreaker
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Flamethrower / Fire Blast
- Solar Beam
- Focus Blast / Scorching Sands
- Roost / Hidden Power Electric

[SET COMMENTS]
Mega Charizard Y makes for a great wallbreaker on Flying teams. Fire Blast, although having it has lower accuracy, can be used over Flamethrower, notably 2HKOing Alolan Muk and Clodsire under sun. Solar Beam covers Water-types that resist Flamethrower like Swampert and Rotom-W, and thanks to sun, it does not need to charge. Focus Blast targets Dark- and Steel-types such as Hydreigon and Heatran. Alternatively, Scorching Sands can be used to target Heatran more reliably, as well as providing coverage against Toxapex (RC) and Iron Hands, the latter of which can be greatly hindered thanks to the burn chance. Hidden Power Electric can be run over Roost to greatly threaten Water teams in tandem with Solar Beam, threatening the likes of Pelipper, Mantine, and Gyarados. Dragonite and Mega Charizard Y form a great offensive pairing, with Mega Charizard Y threatening physically bulky threats like Mega Scizor and Corviknight for Dragonite, while it Dragonite acts as a late-game sweeper while dealing and deals (avoiding while repetition) with Alolan Muk and Nihilego for Mega Charizard Y. Corviknight and Mantine are essential teammates, as they remove Stealth Rock with Defog, (AC) that which would otherwise effectively leaves leave Mega Charizard Y out of the match. Corviknight also brings it Mega Charizard Y in with U-turn, while Mantine helps against rain teams, taking hits from Barraskewda and Mega Swampert. In turn, (best to transition here) Mega Charizard Y takes out threats to it them both (assuming what you mean- "it" ambiguous here, if you mean something else put that thing instead) like Rotom-W (RC) and Magnezone. Entry It also appreciates entry (passive voice) hazard support from Landorus and Gliscor is appreciated by Mega Charizard Y (RC) wearing down foes to help it wallbreak easier more easily, while both setters (subject is hazard support, not lando + gliscor) also providing provide an Electric immunity. In return, Mega Charizard Y handles Ice-types like Articuno and Mamoswine. Enamorus makes for a great partner because it handles Dark-types like Weavile and Greninja and provides Healing Wish support; and it appreciates the removal of bulky Steel-types in return.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/captaindaimyo.602431/
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Grammar checked by:
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Done