Jukain
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ok so some other changes after talking to theender (want to talk to everyone else later about different mentions and solidifying sets and whatnot, just getting a few more things out of the way)
when you changed dd's main nature to jolly, you forgot to change the spread to 104 HP / 220 Atk / 184 Spe aka the one that lets it outspeed scarf lando, which is the main point of running jolly in the first place. throw a mention for 216 spe jolly in set details in order to outrun scarf kyub, which is gaining popularity, but the hp investment is useful enough that it shouldn't be on the primary spread.
dclaw should still be slashed on wisp zard x as dragon stab definitely has merit. i said it should be a secondary option, not to remove it entirely.
drop the investment on wisp zard x down to 240 and pour the rest into spdef. outspeeding diggers isn't notable enough for the main spread and moreover the loss in bulk involved in doing so.
240 HP / 76 Def / 176 SpD / 16 Spe Calm is a better spread for wisp zard y. the current defense investment you have is pretty arbitrary (it was originally for mawile which obviously isn't a concern anymore), and this provides a concrete benchmark in avoiding the 2hko from jolly lo sharp koff and 2hko from ada blackglasses, while hitting a spdef jump point.
when you changed dd's main nature to jolly, you forgot to change the spread to 104 HP / 220 Atk / 184 Spe aka the one that lets it outspeed scarf lando, which is the main point of running jolly in the first place. throw a mention for 216 spe jolly in set details in order to outrun scarf kyub, which is gaining popularity, but the hp investment is useful enough that it shouldn't be on the primary spread.
dclaw should still be slashed on wisp zard x as dragon stab definitely has merit. i said it should be a secondary option, not to remove it entirely.
drop the investment on wisp zard x down to 240 and pour the rest into spdef. outspeeding diggers isn't notable enough for the main spread and moreover the loss in bulk involved in doing so.
240 HP / 76 Def / 176 SpD / 16 Spe Calm is a better spread for wisp zard y. the current defense investment you have is pretty arbitrary (it was originally for mawile which obviously isn't a concern anymore), and this provides a concrete benchmark in avoiding the 2hko from jolly lo sharp koff and 2hko from ada blackglasses, while hitting a spdef jump point.