PU Bruxish

[velvet]

Bruxish @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Strong Jaw
Tera Type: Psychic / Water
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Psychic Fangs
- Wave Crash
- Flip Turn
- Ice Fang

Bruxish is a powerful physical attacker and revenge killer in PU, utilizing powerful Strong Jaw-boosted Water- and Psychic-type STAB moves and ability to pivot to become a resourceful wallbreaker. Flip Turn allows Bruxish to pivot around difficult matchups like Wo-Chien and Decidueye, letting in Pokemon that threaten them such as Scyther. Ice Fang helps hit Grass-types like Wo-Chien and Decidueye, which normally would be a tough matchup for Bruxish. Tera Psychic greatly boosts Psychic Fangs' damage output, but Bruxish can also use Tera Water to increase Water-type attacks as well as taking neutral damage from incoming Ghost- and Dark-type priority moves. Despite having Ice-type coverage, Bruxish still struggles against Grass-types like Virizion and Wo-Chien due to it being prediction- reliant against them, having Fire- and Flying-types like Oricorio-F and Scyther are greatly appreciated. VoltTurn users like Hisuian Electrode, Rotom-C, and Clawitzer create momentum and form a pivot core, with Bruxish letting them switch in and threaten bulkier Pokemon like Bronzong and Houndstone. Grass-types like Wo-Chien help with Water-types like Lanturn and opposing Bruxish, and in return Bruxish helps threaten Fire-types like Charizard and Typhlosion.

 

[velvet]

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[Bella]

fish

Bruxish @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Strong Jaw
Tera Type: Psychic / Water
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Psychic Fangs
- Wave Crash
- Flip Turn
- Ice Fang

Bruxish is a powerful physical attacker and revenge killer in PU, utilizing strong Water- and Psychic-type STAB moves (that are compounded with Strong Jaw), and able ability to pivot making it a resourceful wallbreaker. Psychic Fangs deals great damage against those that are normally neutral to it thanks to Strong Jaw and is effective against Poison- and Fighting-types such as Hariyama, Muk, and Toxicroak. (This feels like dex filler, maybe say like "Psyfangs is a highly spammable STAB move thanks to being boosted by Strong Jaw" instead?) Wave Crash is greatly valued for Bruxish as it is its most powerful STAB move dealing great damage per usage. (self explanitory) Flip Turn allows Bruxish to pivot around difficult matchups like Wo-Chien and Shaymin (and bring in teammates to take them on like..? also shaymin is kind of meh, mention another thing instead) . Ice Fang helps hit Grass-types like Wo-Chien and Decidueye which normally would be a tough matchup for Bruxish. Despite having Ice-type coverage, Bruxish still struggles against Grass-types like Decidueye and Wo-Chien (due to it being prediction reliant against them) , so having Fire- and Flying-types like Oricorio-F and Dodrio Scyther (more notable mention imo) are greatly appreciated. VoltTurn users like Hisuian Electrode, Rotom-M, and Clawitzer create momentum and form a pivot core with Bruxish, helping them switch in on bulkier Pokemon like Weezing and Houndstone (This reads awkwardly, are you saying Bruxish gives these partners the ability to get them in to threaten these 2? If so, mention something other than weezing, bruxish just clicks Psyfangs against it.) . Grass-types like Shaymin and Wo-Chien help with Water-types like Lanturn and other Bruxish, in return Bruxish helps threaten Fire-types like Charizard and Typhlosion.
(No mention on tera type anywhere???)

dm me on disc when you implement this

 

[velvet]

fish

Bruxish @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Strong Jaw
Tera Type: Psychic / Water
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Psychic Fangs
- Wave Crash
- Flip Turn
- Ice Fang

Bruxish is a powerful physical attacker and revenge killer in PU, utilizing strong Water- and Psychic-type STAB moves (that are compounded with Strong Jaw), and able ability to pivot making it a resourceful wallbreaker. Psychic Fangs deals great damage against those that are normally neutral to it thanks to Strong Jaw and is effective against Poison- and Fighting-types such as Hariyama, Muk, and Toxicroak. (This feels like dex filler, maybe say like "Psyfangs is a highly spammable STAB move thanks to being boosted by Strong Jaw" instead?) Wave Crash is greatly valued for Bruxish as it is its most powerful STAB move dealing great damage per usage. (self explanitory) Flip Turn allows Bruxish to pivot around difficult matchups like Wo-Chien and Shaymin (and bring in teammates to take them on like..? also shaymin is kind of meh, mention another thing instead) . Ice Fang helps hit Grass-types like Wo-Chien and Decidueye which normally would be a tough matchup for Bruxish. Despite having Ice-type coverage, Bruxish still struggles against Grass-types like Decidueye and Wo-Chien (due to it being prediction reliant against them) , so having Fire- and Flying-types like Oricorio-F and Dodrio Scyther (more notable mention imo) are greatly appreciated. VoltTurn users like Hisuian Electrode, Rotom-M, and Clawitzer create momentum and form a pivot core with Bruxish, helping them switch in on bulkier Pokemon like Weezing and Houndstone (This reads awkwardly, are you saying Bruxish gives these partners the ability to get them in to threaten these 2? If so, mention something other than weezing, bruxish just clicks Psyfangs against it.) . Grass-types like Shaymin and Wo-Chien help with Water-types like Lanturn and other Bruxish, in return Bruxish helps threaten Fire-types like Charizard and Typhlosion.
(No mention on tera type anywhere???)

dm me on disc when you implement this
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Added the fixes + some from pms

 

[velvet]

GP Team

 

[Milak]

Add (AC=add comma, AA=apostrophe, AH=add hyphen)
Remove (RC=remove comma)
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Bruxish @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Strong Jaw
Tera Type: Psychic / Water
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Psychic Fangs
- Wave Crash
- Flip Turn
- Ice Fang

Bruxish is a powerful physical attacker and revenge killer in PU, utilizing strong powerful Strong Jaw-boosted Water- and Psychic-type STAB moves that are compounded with Strong Jaw,(RC) and ability to pivot making it to become a resourceful wallbreaker. Psychic Fangs is a highly spammable STAB move thanks to being boosted by Strong Jaw. (this is just fluff, you're not rly saying anything specific about the move) Flip Turn allows Bruxish to pivot around difficult matchups like Wo-Chien and Decidueye, letting in Pokemon that threaten them such as Scyther. Ice Fang helps hit Grass-types like Wo-Chien and Decidueye,(AC) which normally would be a tough matchup for Bruxish. Tera Psychic greatly boosts Psychic Fangs'(AA) damage output, and but Bruxish can also use Tera Water to increase the power of Water-type attacks as well as take taking neutral damage from incoming Ghost- and Dark-type priority moves. Despite having Ice-type coverage, Bruxish still struggles against Grass-types like Virizion and Wo-Chien due to it being prediction-(AH)reliant against them, so having Fire- and Flying-types like Oricorio-F and Scyther are greatly appreciated. VoltTurn users like Hisuian Electrode, Rotom-M Rotom-C, and Clawitzer create momentum and form a pivot core, with Bruxish letting them switch in and threaten bulkier Pokemon like Bronzong and Houndstone. Grass-types like Wo-Chien help with Water-types like Lanturn and other opposing Bruxish, and in return Bruxish helps threaten Fire-types like Charizard and Typhlosion.

GP Team done

 

[Samirsin]

Translator here
Tera Psychic greatly boosts Psychic Fangs’
In this phrase there's an accent instead of an apostrophe

 

[Marnie]