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Lumari

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  • Sobi
    Lumari
    Lumari
    if it is, it's not a very funny one lol. don't see a real reason to assume it would be? just an analysis for an unviable mon...
    Sobi
    Sobi
    uh the set was gimmicky, saying that it's terrible, etc.. but i'll change my check then
    Lumari
    Lumari
    yeah, sorry :[ but it's happened before that people incorrectly assumed something was a joke analysis, actual joke analyses are really unambiguous (bad sets, not just gimmicky ones, or funny writing) etc
    Sobi
    Lumari
    Lumari
    glanced over it now, sorry! the stuff you missed you should be able to glance from gato's / my checks, and re. your changes, the objective ones appeared good... only things that i'd like to point out were the fluff thing in the overview (it's not a matter of "i guess this technically can be removed", it's a matter of "the extra words are harmful here", which wasn't the case afaik, on the contrary actually), and the it -> Exploud change in Moves ("it" fulfills the same function in the second part of the sentence as "Exploud" did in the first part, so intuitively it's pretty clear that Exploud is meant. and excessive names are ugly. not a big issue though)
    Eien
    Hi, I've been working incrementally on an amcheck for Landorus-T in DOU. Is it okay if I try to finish what I have and post it? (I saw your reservation and I've been working for a while now). If I can, how long can you wait for me to finish it?
    InfernapeTropius11
    Hello, on a GP check you did for MDiancie (AG) you said (add hypen) in red and crossed out. Does that mean to remove the hyphen that was there or was it just a mistake? The word was switch-ins in case that helps
    Lumari
    Lumari
    nah, there should be a hyphen, sounds like you left the first checker's "add hyphen" comment in
    InfernapeTropius11
    InfernapeTropius11
    ah ok, thank you for clarifying that :)
    Eien
    Lumari
    Lumari
    i quickly glanced over it, couple tiny things that were a tad much, but looked good overall :) didn't have time for more thorough feedback + couldn't go over it myself cause i did the first check, but it looks like frenzy got you covered there
    Eien
    Eien
    Yeah, I reviewed frenzy's feedback. Thanks anyway!
    Aberforth
    What do you mean by "OK"?
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    Aberforth
    Aberforth
    Ahh ok then makes sense.
    Lumari
    Lumari
    done~
    and yeah maybe i should stop placeholdering using "ok", at one point i also had someone counting it as an approval :[
    Aberforth
    Aberforth
    yeah I wasn't sure if that OK meant that the work the other guy did was enough lol.
    Sobi
    I'm back with yet another question. Do you think this change is justifiable:
    "Heat Wave is a STAB spread move that can hit both Pokemon on the opposing side" -> "Heat Wave can hit both Pokemon on the opposing side".
    I was told that saying WHAT a move is, is just extraneous information, so would you have made that change?
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    Sobi
    Sobi
    but "..AND CAN easily OHKO it, AND CAN chip away" - surely there's no need to be repeating "can" in the second part.
    Lumari
    Lumari
    ", and it deals a minimum of 70% to the offensive set with the combination of Fake Out and Sucker Punch while also wasting sand turns" if that's the issue... the most important thing is not fusing those two parts together in any case, because they discuss different sets
    Sobi
    Sobi
    oh okay, thank you n_n
    Sobi
    i'm back with a question
    "Terrakion is one of OU's most fearsome and underrated wallbreakers..."
    don't you think "and" -> "yet"? "most fearsome", and "underrated" are kinda opposite, so I'm sure it would make sense having "yet".. what do you think?
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    Sobi
    Sobi
    also, I was wondering: should you and I go through all my amchecks up till now, and see what I've done well, and how I can improve? Misaka told me that she got rejected when she applied for the GP team, but she had gone through all her checks with you (I think she said it was you..), so I thought it would be a good idea to do the same for you! What do you think of the idea? (I also chose you and not P2/Gato, because you're the one that looks over my checks most of the times :3)
    Lumari
    Lumari
    i recall discussing a couple things with her, but surely not _everything_... but that's def a good idea yeah, i've got a couple things to do tonight and discussing checks takes time if you want to do it right, but i can write you something up at some later point :0
    Sobi
    Sobi
    whatever you think is best!
    Sobi
    hey
    what do you think about using "format", "tier", and "metagame" / "meta"? I mean, the last three are commonly used, but the former isn't--should it be changed.. or should different words be used if the author is constantly repeating it? thanks :]
    Lumari
    Lumari
    pfff.... "meta" should be changed to "metagame" in c&c cuz no slang / abbreviations. i'd have to see instances of "format" within their context to see what you're talking about, but there are definitely instances where it's correct.

    and yes, repetition is reason for changing up diction a bit :)
    bobochan
    Lumari
    Lumari
    hm looks like misaka didn't post it, and then it gets hard for me to notice :/ either way, added, ty for being observant :)
    bobochan
    bobochan
    No probs! She hardly post it there for some reason :s ~Thank ya TDP! You da real MVP~
    dhelmise
    You da real TDP
    my irc just died so idk what to do
    Lumari
    Lumari
    just restart the tab i guess :[ it can have trouble reconnecting at times though, in which case probably nice talking to ya + see you later :[
    dhelmise
    yea it isnt reconnecting, so nice talking to you too! cya
    Sobi
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    Sobi
    Sobi
    Yeah, sure.
    Sobi
    Sobi
    I am reminding you to PM me something (idk if it's tomorrow where you are 0~0)
    Lumari
    Lumari
    workin on in now! actually i think it's easier if i just do the actual 1/2 first lol so that i won't have to mark those things in your check and do the same work twice >_>
    my comp isn't starting so I can't get on irc, just PM me pls
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    Lumari
    Lumari
    !__!
    Lumari
    Lumari
    hrnngg busy with other things + layton 6 stronger than it should have been but "tomorrow for sure" u_u (if you don't have a reply when you wake up, just gimme another beep.) did read it over, good check overall especially on the objective stuff but couple issues with unnecessary changes (though not a lot), some suboptimal prose fixes, and some misunderstandings D: more elaborate reply to come asap!
    dhelmise
    :D
    Swede
    I had to skim through your top 500 list. I'm curious to know, what song on there has the latest release? I saw Beautiful Day but I'm not sure if that's the most recent.
    Lumari
    Lumari
    Dust and Dreams, Midnight Sun, Wolflight, and Corycian Fire by Steve Hackett (album was released last year). If you're talking latest release by an actually not ancient band lol (other recent songs by old bands include the ones from Clockwork Angels by Rush (2011) and The Endless River by Pink Floyd (2014)), I'm... honestly not too sure heh, but off the top of my head it should be Uprising :)
    strawberry
    thanks for the tag, now I see where the real appreciation lies
    strawberry
    strawberry
    not from people who comment on my smell in their shoutouts
    Lumari
    Lumari
    i take people just the way they are
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